fettered freedom
the mind -
a scoop of rainbow
in the summer sky,
the softness of the salt
in a teardrop,
the choked voice
in a suffocated throat,
the elixir off the fountain
in the forbidden terrain of innocence.
the mind -
the wings of a unicorn
the golden glint in the eye of the dragon
the darkness of the dungeon of death
the black grey silver of life
the only open window
the only locked door
the only prison
the only cascading river
... the mind
10 comments:
To try comment on this poem would ruin its beauty... i have learnt to appreciate what is said without looking into things... :)
sweety uv encapsulated d nuances amazingly..luvvd dis..
There is something in it that I do not understand...It's a beautiful poem.
yea yea..its alright..nothing too great..same sad n gloomy stuff. seen it all befo. get an new hobby..like playing cricket or sumthing...
HAHA.. Sorry Sanyukta...i had to do that..u can delete this if u want. But yea its nice. I like..
I really dont go deep into this stuff but from what i see ur writing some good stuff. See you on the back of a book :P
@aman
thank u :)
@bling
hmmm... like the way u go into the details befo u comment...thanx a ton kunju :)
@bijay kumar
dats the mind for u...u never understand it in absolutes...hehe
thank u ... hope to hear frm u more :)
@k
*humph* im NOT deleting ur comment... :P
dis 1 is nt as sad n gloomy though...
cricket...hahaha...i was thinking more interms of dodo hunting as a new Hobby...haha...wotsay..
keep reading :)
Confucius says, "Comments are so commonplace; let's get down and dirty and analyze it. BABY. "
Hahahaha
hard to describe this poem in a word... but i'd try awesome! ever think of writing a book?
it kinda reminds me of the insanly convoluted dialogue u wrote 4 aditi in 'waitin 4 lefty'... only much much more evocative!
natasha
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